This week, Year 5 have been hard at work writing gripping setting descriptions of a battlefield, inspired by our class book War Horse. The children imagined what it might have been like to stand among the mud, smoke and chaos of war — and their writing truly brought the scene to life.
Our grammar focus has been on using semi-colons — both to split independent clauses and to create detailed, powerful lists. We also worked hard on using commas accurately to avoid ambiguity, making sure our meaning was always clear. We’re incredibly proud of the effort and creativity everyone has shown. The vocabulary choices, imagery and sentence structures are fantastic. Take a look at some of our amazing work below — you'll feel like you're right there on the battlefield with them! Well done Year 5, I am beyond proud of you all! Comments are closed.
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